For the review!
Now the intro strings are too loud which drowns out other sounds so I would start to look at mastering the string (may be turn it down a touch). The same goes for the .... monster synth? (Not sure what to describe it as). The melody is too repetitive and difficult to listen to.
Despite your comment about drums I can feel the kick on the bass which is a sign of good EQ(ing).
Going back to the main synth, it really does not fit well in this track as it is too harsh and thus results in distorting all the other sounds in the background. Also, Im sure this is a preset from one of the FL synths (HL harmor or harmless comes to mind). I would steer clear away from the presets for one reason:
The easiest way to differentiate between a good music producer and a person in their bedroom is by the samples used. For example, the best house and dance have high quality samples (drums), while never EVER using a preset (you will find that the best DJs make their own samples). A classic example is DJ Sasha - Xpanda.
This song on the whole was very difficult to listen to and needs severe improvement. Start by looking into that main synth! Personally if I had ownership of this project I would first get out the FMDRIVE synth (mega drive vst), up the beat and turn it into a graveyard game level.